Editing Talk:Metroid Fusion

== Feedback on the Story Section ==
Before I go on, I would like to have feedback on the story section. I need to know whether the level of detail that I write it in is okay, or if I should shorten it to only cover the more basic storyline information instead of every move that Samus does during the game. - [[User:Cobold|Cobold]] 14:20, 28 January 2010 (UTC)

I'd say go in less detail. Hightlight the main issues of Samus and the SA-X, Samus' re-acquisition of her powers, the crap with the Federation being secretive, etc... But don't make it read like a novel. [[User:Erimgard|~Erimgard]] 22:20, 29 January 2010 (UTC)
:2257 thinks that more story cannot hurt, while a short story summary might ommit facts that a few people would actually like to know from the article. - [[User:Cobold|Cobold]] 22:30, 29 January 2010 (UTC)

::Ah, well I'm not exactly a wiki veteran, so I guess I'll defer on that one. However, I would suggest you elaborate on the Core X's a little more. [[User:Erimgard|~Erimgard]] 22:38, 29 January 2010 (UTC)


Given that we know Fusion's placement is post-Other M, but Other M has not yet been released, should it still say that it's chronologically after Super, or should it say after the yet to be released Other M? [[User:Erimgard|~Erimgard]] 15:09, 25 April 2010 (UTC)

:In my opinion it should say Metroid Fusion is after Metroid: Other M. Metroid: Other M is a interquel between Super Metroid and Metroid Fusion, thus Metroid Fusion is still kind of the sequel of Super Metroid but no more the next Metroid game in chronological order. [[User:MOtherMetroid|MOtherMetroid]] 16:26, 25 April 2010 (UTC)

::I changed the article a bit (added links, etc.) and corrected it now that it's no more the next chronological game after Super Metroid. I hope no one's against this. [[User:MOtherMetroid|MOtherMetroid]] 17:04, 25 April 2010 (UTC)

== The Article Itself ==

When I first saw this article, I noticed that, in terms or editing, it was very sloppy. Repeating links (I think I'm going to have a seizure with "Samus" floating everywhere), parentheses in the middle of a sentence (TRO, PAS, whatever, man...), effortless information ("a lot of energy" what the hell...), and even spelling mistakes (Adam Malxovixh.....). I don't mean to sound too terribly harsh, but...seriously!
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 When I first saw this article, I noticed that, in terms or editing, it was very sloppy. Repeating links (I think I'm going to have a seizure with "Samus" floating everywhere), parentheses in the middle of a sentence (TRO, PAS, whatever, man...), effortless information ("a lot of energy" what the hell...), and even spelling mistakes (Adam Malxovixh.....). I don't mean to sound too terribly harsh, but...seriously!
-==Stub status==
-Does this page REALLY need the 'stub' banner on it? It's pretty well expanded. [[User:Findow|Findow]] 05:40, 01 August 2011
-:No it does not. It could be lengthier, but it's big enough to not be a stub. Because it is a page about a game, it certainly deserves to be longer and richer in info. {{:User:Malake256/sig}} 15:23, 1 August 2011 (UTC)