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	:Well for one thing, this could definitely use some organization through well thought-out and neatly arranged headers. Additionally, if you're going to make this your pet project, do research; read through lore and scans to effectively write the ''history'' and ''science'' of Portals. If you can find a way to breathe a little life into this article and make it as in-universe as possible, that makes for an excellent read!! {{:User:Embyr_75/sig}} 01:00, 16 August 2011 (UTC)		:Well for one thing, this could definitely use some organization through well thought-out and neatly arranged headers. Additionally, if you're going to make this your pet project, do research; read through lore and scans to effectively write the ''history'' and ''science'' of Portals. If you can find a way to breathe a little life into this article and make it as in-universe as possible, that makes for an excellent read!! {{:User:Embyr_75/sig}} 01:00, 16 August 2011 (UTC)

			::Alright, I'll try to get that sort of stuff on the article, thanks for the advice. {{User:Bop1996/sig}} 00:25, 19 August 2011 (UTC)